lunes, 19 de octubre de 2015

Dear Editor

Our teacher of language Andrea ask us to write formal letter. For this assigment, she gave us instructions:
  • Start the letter "Dear editor"
  • Follow the plan on page 93
  • Use "Useful expressions"
  • Introducty comments
  • Agreeing
  • Explaning your views
  • Claryfing
Dear Editor,
I read you article about crimes, I´m in agreement  with the idea of installating cameras in the posts of the streets, because of this they can catch a lot of thieves and this will help you to see what is happening at the streets. I strongly disagree with citizens using celphones in the streets while they walk and I cannot support the view that they no activate the alarm house by the night. Also the neighbors can prevent with and neighbors-alarms that are very useful. Additionaly, the police have to increase in all the aspects, in the personnel. Furthermore, the police work in my opinion is not beeing successful. For a conclutuion, I believe that people have to prevent more and be prepare and police people have to produce more security
                              Sincerly,
                                              Felipe Rolon

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