The poem "The Cold and the Pebble" written
by William Blake, talks about two different rocks classes opinions about love.
This essay will be about each character opinion about love.
In the case of the Clod opinion about love is a god
side, he name "Nor for itself hath any care", this metaphor is
showing how loves care about him and the others. Particularly in this anaphora,
"And builds a Heaven in Hell despair.' ” is displayed that love makes
everything right when everything is wrong.
In the case of the Pebble, it's another point of view
of love, a bad side. "And builds a Hell in Heaven's despite", in this
anaphora is indicate that love is a heaven when everything is wrong. And that
it's only complains himself, in this anaphora is show "Love seeketh only
self to please".
For a conclusion, in this poem written by William
Blake, "The Clod and the Pebble" this rocks have different opinions about
love. From mi point of view in the two cases they have had to different stories
about love because of the past and presents actions.
Achievements: Your essay is well organised in paragraphs, you selected four quotes and you tried to mention literary devices.
ResponderEliminarThings to improve: Your language is quite difficult to understand, there are some mistakes as regards vocabulary that make your ideas confusing.
- In the introduction you don´t specify what two ideas of love are prersented.
- The body is a bit short. Why not analysing the choice of a clod and a pebble as characters? We discussed this in class.
Are you sure the first quotation you chose is a metaphor? Why?
I´m glad you mentioned anaphora. Why do you think the author chose to repeat a structure. Include this in your essay.
Revise the use of the word "complains".
- Conclusion: since you mention experience as something that defines the character´s idea of love, you should refer to what is said in the poem about the pebble and the clod´s living conditions.
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